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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : humanity



محمد معز
11-19-2014, 01:21 PM
It doesn't matter if you are religious or not, this is just a nice feel good story about humanity.
I was walking around in a Big Bazar store shopping, when I saw a Cashier talking to a boy couldn't have been more than 5 or 6 years old..
The Cashier said, 'I'm sorry, but you don't have enough money to buy this doll. Then the little boy turned to the cashier and asked: are you sure I don't have enough money?''
The cashier counted his cash once again and replied: ''You know that you don't have enough money to buy the doll, my dear.'' The little boy was still holding the doll in his hand.
Finally, I walked toward him and I asked him who he wished to give this doll to. 'It's the doll that my sister loved most and wanted so much . I wanted to Gift her for her BIRTHDAY.
I have to give the doll to my mommy so that she can give it to my sister when she goes there.' His eyes were so sad while saying this. 'My Sister has gone to be with God.. Daddy says that Mommy is going to see God very soon too, so I thought that she could take the doll with her to give it to my sister...''
My heart nearly stopped. The little boy looked up at me and said: 'I told daddy to tell mommy not to go yet. I need her to wait until I come back from the mall.' Then he showed me a very nice photo of him where he was laughing. He then told me 'I want mommy to take my picture with her so my sister won't forget me.' 'I love my mommy and I wish she doesn't have to leave me, but daddy says that she has to go to be with my little sister.' Then he looked again at the doll with sad eyes, very quietly..
I quickly reached for my wallet and said to the boy. 'Suppose we check again, just in case you do have enough money for the doll?''
'OK' he said, 'I hope I do have enough.' I added some of my money to his with out him seeing and we started to count it. There was enough for the doll and even some spare money.
The little boy said: 'Thank you God for giving me enough money!'
Then he looked at me and added, 'I asked last night before I went to sleep for God to make sure I had enough money to buy this doll, so that mommy could give It to my sister. He heard me!'' 'I also wanted to have enough money to buy a white rose for my mommy, but I didn't dare to ask God for too much. But He gave me enough to buy the doll and a white rose. My mommy loves white roses.'
I finished my shopping in a totally different state from when I started. I couldn't get the little boy out of my mind.
Then I remembered a local news paper article two days ago, which mentioned a drunk man in a truck, who hit a car occupied by a young woman and a little girl. The little girl died right away, and the mother was left in a critical state. The family had to decide whether to pull the plug on the life-sustaining machine, because the young woman would not be able to recover from the coma. Was this the family of the little boy?
Two days after this encounter with the little boy, I read in the news paper that the young woman had passed away.. I couldn't stop myself as I bought a bunch of white roses and I went to the funeral home where the body of the young woman was exposed for people to see and make last wishes before her burial.
She was there, in her coffin, holding a beautiful white rose in her hand with the photo of the little boy and the doll placed over her chest. I left the place, teary-eyed, feeling that my life had been changed for ever...
The love that the little boy had for his mother and his sister is still, to this day, hard to imagine. And in a fraction of a second, a drunk driver had taken all this away from him.

العمده
11-19-2014, 01:31 PM
قصه معبره وجميله ،، قريت الى نصها وغلبنى اكملها ،، ثم اتشدعت وكملتها

اختيار جميل يا محمد

سارة عمر
11-19-2014, 01:36 PM
Ya Salam ,, Nice Story
Summit of love and innocence

محمد معز
11-19-2014, 01:40 PM
قصه معبره وجميله ،، قريت الى نصها وغلبنى اكملها ،، ثم اتشدعت وكملتها

اختيار جميل يا محمد

Thanks Mr Omda, it's a little bit far from Sudanese society, That's why you got bored in the middle of the story.
.Anyway, it's heartbreaking

محمد معز
11-19-2014, 01:42 PM
Ya Salam ,, Nice Story
Summit of love and innocence


Thanks Sarah!

Rahal
11-19-2014, 05:43 PM
That`s great you are here,thanks Mohammed for such touching story,when and where we are we should think as a human being.

محمد معز
11-19-2014, 06:36 PM
That`s great you are here,thanks Mohammed for such touching story,when and where we are we should think as a human being.

It's my pleasure to be a part of this community. Of course we should unless, we are savages! Thank you so much uncle.

Abdelazim
11-20-2014, 07:57 AM
Thanks Mr Omda, it's a little bit far from Sudanese society, That's why you got bored in the middle of the story.
.Anyway, it's heartbreaking


It's indeed heartbreaking story and it is also almost impossible to find in our society as our people don't pay attention to such things

أبو عبير
11-20-2014, 08:56 AM
It doesn't matter if you are religious or not, this is just a nice feel good story about humanity.
I was walking around in a Big Bazar store shopping, when I saw a Cashier talking to a boy couldn't have been more than 5 or 6 years old..
The Cashier said, 'I'm sorry, but you don't have enough money to buy this doll. Then the little boy turned to the cashier and asked: are you sure I don't have enough money?''
The cashier counted his cash once again and replied: ''You know that you don't have enough money to buy the doll, my dear.'' The little boy was still holding the doll in his hand.
Finally, I walked toward him and I asked him who he wished to give this doll to. 'It's the doll that my sister loved most and wanted so much . I wanted to Gift her for her BIRTHDAY.
I have to give the doll to my mommy so that she can give it to my sister when she goes there.' His eyes were so sad while saying this. 'My Sister has gone to be with God.. Daddy says that Mommy is going to see God very soon too, so I thought that she could take the doll with her to give it to my sister...''
My heart nearly stopped. The little boy looked up at me and said: 'I told daddy to tell mommy not to go yet. I need her to wait until I come back from the mall.' Then he showed me a very nice photo of him where he was laughing. He then told me 'I want mommy to take my picture with her so my sister won't forget me.' 'I love my mommy and I wish she doesn't have to leave me, but daddy says that she has to go to be with my little sister.' Then he looked again at the doll with sad eyes, very quietly..
I quickly reached for my wallet and said to the boy. 'Suppose we check again, just in case you do have enough money for the doll?''
'OK' he said, 'I hope I do have enough.' I added some of my money to his with out him seeing and we started to count it. There was enough for the doll and even some spare money.
The little boy said: 'Thank you God for giving me enough money!'
Then he looked at me and added, 'I asked last night before I went to sleep for God to make sure I had enough money to buy this doll, so that mommy could give It to my sister. He heard me!'' 'I also wanted to have enough money to buy a white rose for my mommy, but I didn't dare to ask God for too much. But He gave me enough to buy the doll and a white rose. My mommy loves white roses.'
I finished my shopping in a totally different state from when I started. I couldn't get the little boy out of my mind.
Then I remembered a local news paper article two days ago, which mentioned a drunk man in a truck, who hit a car occupied by a young woman and a little girl. The little girl died right away, and the mother was left in a critical state. The family had to decide whether to pull the plug on the life-sustaining machine, because the young woman would not be able to recover from the coma. Was this the family of the little boy?
Two days after this encounter with the little boy, I read in the news paper that the young woman had passed away.. I couldn't stop myself as I bought a bunch of white roses and I went to the funeral home where the body of the young woman was exposed for people to see and make last wishes before her burial.
She was there, in her coffin, holding a beautiful white rose in her hand with the photo of the little boy and the doll placed over her chest. I left the place, teary-eyed, feeling that my life had been changed for ever...
The love that the little boy had for his mother and his sister is still, to this day, hard to imagine. And in a fraction of a second, a drunk driver had taken all this away from him.



Hi Brother Mohammed Moez
As I am a words lover the way it Song, Lyric, Poem, and Story, really I enjoyed it. With some comments here it goes.
01 I feel that I got confused between the little boy (as a hero) and you (as a writer) when these is direct/quoted or/and indirect/reported speech, and I believe that the readers will agreed with me. Also you used inverted single and double comma, it’s clear that you mixed between American and British Style (as you use daddy and mommy).
02 In some part of the story some text need to be treated, I knew that some time the writer need to jump over the words and look back again, you dislocated this jump over her (I quickly reached my wallet….. etc).
03 You use the in front of the thing that mentioned for the first time (The Mother was left in the critical state.. ) and you forget to use it for the thing that mentioned for the second time ( a White rose ).
Finally it’s a nice story that move-up our inner, feelings and consciences as human being, and I hope that the drunk drivers will keep saving our life.

محمد معز
11-20-2014, 12:09 PM
It's indeed heartbreaking story and it is also almost impossible to find in our society as our people don't pay attention to such things


Unfortunately, things getting worst, and we become like wolves, killing each other.
Hopefully, everything will be alright, and may Allah be with us.

محمد معز
11-20-2014, 12:45 PM
Hi Brother Mohammed Moez
As I am a words lover the way it Song, Lyric, Poem, and Story, really I enjoyed it. With some comments here it goes.
01 I feel that I got confused between the little boy (as a hero) and you (as a writer) when these is direct/quoted or/and indirect/reported speech, and I believe that the readers will agreed with me. Also you used inverted single and double comma, it’s clear that you mixed between American and British Style (as you use daddy and mommy).
02 In some part of the story some text need to be treated, I knew that some time the writer need to jump over the words and look back again, you dislocated this jump over her (I quickly reached my wallet….. etc).
03 You use the in front of the thing that mentioned for the first time (The Mother was left in the critical state.. ) and you forget to use it for the thing that mentioned for the second time ( a White rose ).
Finally it’s a nice story that move-up our inner, feelings and consciences as human being, and I hope that the drunk drivers will keep saving our life.


I'm English lover too!
well, I will try to clarify your doubts, and make things clear!
Yes, I would agree there are some American English words being used, but It doesn't matter, because words like "daddy & mommy" could be also used in British English, and these kinda words are well-known to English speakers, no matter which English accent speak.
I think jumping and playing over the words is kinda art writing, and make the readers pay more attention.
The writer would say, after seeing the boy's situation, the writer would handle it as quickly as he/she could.
I did not get what you mean by " you forget to use it for the things..".
And I really hope drivers quiet drinking, at least when they drive.
Eventually, I would thank you for your comments.

أبو عبير
11-23-2014, 07:56 AM
It doesn't matter if you are religious or not, this is just a nice feel good story about humanity.
I was walking around in a Big Bazar store shopping, when I saw a Cashier talking to a boy couldn't have been more than 5 or 6 years old..
The Cashier said, 'I'm sorry, but you don't have enough money to buy this doll. Then the little boy turned to the cashier and asked: are you sure I don't have enough money?''
The cashier counted his cash once again and replied: ''You know that you don't have enough money to buy the doll, my dear.'' The little boy was still holding the doll in his hand.
Finally, I walked toward him and I asked him who he wished to give this doll to. 'It's the doll that my sister loved most and wanted so much . I wanted to Gift her for her BIRTHDAY.
I have to give the doll to my mommy so that she can give it to my sister when she goes there.' His eyes were so sad while saying this. 'My Sister has gone to be with God.. Daddy says that Mommy is going to see God very soon too, so I thought that she could take the doll with her to give it to my sister...''
My heart nearly stopped. The little boy looked up at me and said: 'I told daddy to tell mommy not to go yet. I need her to wait until I come back from the mall.' Then he showed me a very nice photo of him where he was laughing. He then told me 'I want mommy to take my picture with her so my sister won't forget me.' 'I love my mommy and I wish she doesn't have to leave me, but daddy says that she has to go to be with my little sister.' Then he looked again at the doll with sad eyes, very quietly..
I quickly reached for my wallet and said to the boy. 'Suppose we check again, just in case you do have enough money for the doll?''
'OK' he said, 'I hope I do have enough.' I added some of my money to his with out him seeing and we started to count it. There was enough for the doll and even some spare money.
The little boy said: 'Thank you God for giving me enough money!'
Then he looked at me and added, 'I asked last night before I went to sleep for God to make sure I had enough money to buy this doll, so that mommy could give It to my sister. He heard me!'' 'I also wanted to have enough money to buy a white rose for my mommy, but I didn't dare to ask God for too much. But He gave me enough to buy the doll and a white rose. My mommy loves white roses.'
I finished my shopping in a totally different state from when I started. I couldn't get the little boy out of my mind.
Then I remembered a local news paper article two days ago, which mentioned a drunk man in a truck, who hit a car occupied by a young woman and a little girl. The little girl died right away, and the mother was left in a critical state. The family had to decide whether to pull the plug on the life-sustaining machine, because the young woman would not be able to recover from the coma. Was this the family of the little boy?
Two days after this encounter with the little boy, I read in the news paper that the young woman had passed away.. I couldn't stop myself as I bought a bunch of white roses and I went to the funeral home where the body of the young woman was exposed for people to see and make last wishes before her burial.
She was there, in her coffin, holding a beautiful white rose in her hand with the photo of the little boy and the doll placed over her chest. I left the place, teary-eyed, feeling that my life had been changed for ever...
The love that the little boy had for his mother and his sister is still, to this day, hard to imagine. And in a fraction of a second, a drunk driver had taken all this away from him.




I'm English lover too!
well, I will try to clarify your doubts, and make things clear!
Yes, I would agree there are some American English words being used, but It doesn't matter, because words like "daddy & mommy" could be also used in British English, and these kinda words are well-known to English speakers, no matter which English accent speak.
I think jumping and playing over the words is kinda art writing, and make the readers pay more attention.
The writer would say, after seeing the boy's situation, the writer would handle it as quickly as he/she could.
I did not get what you mean by " you forget to use it for the things..".
And I really hope drivers quiet drinking, at least when they drive.
Eventually, I would thank you for your comments.




Dearest Brother Mohammed

We use THE before thing that mentioned for the second time, you see what written in read above mentioned (a white rose) should be (The white rose).

with my best wishes

أبو خالد
11-23-2014, 08:19 AM
My heart nearly stopped for this story:cry:

thank you moez

محمد معز
11-23-2014, 11:52 AM
Dearest Brother Mohammed

We use THE before thing that mentioned for the second time, you see what written in read above mentioned (a white rose) should be (The white rose).

with my best wishes

hello My dear brother!
well, Of course there is a difference between "The, a".
I would say "a white rose" which describes the color of the rose that we talking about. And we can say "he's a wise man", "she's an idiot" and again I describe them!
Hopefully, you got it now. :smile:
Thank you so much bro!

محمد معز
11-23-2014, 11:58 AM
My heart nearly stopped for this story:cry:

thank you moez


Sanquo 4 reedeng ya Khalid's dad. :smilie19: